Poem about trees!

Hey guys, i worte a poem in english class and i would love to  have your feedback! please enjoy!

The tree
Always changing its appearance.
Bright green in the summer,
Yellow, red, amd sun-kissed in the fall,
Bare and vulnerable in the winter,
Renewed in the spring.
Ready for a whole new year of change


I watched it in the wind.
I heard the crushing of leaves underneath me,
As it bent to greet me.
I whispered a quiet hello to the wind,
so the soft word would be carried up.
Up towards the tree's wooden ears.


I looked up towards its stiff, hard face,
And it seemed sad.
But once the sweet melody of the wind
started to play, a small smile
appeared on his face, as he started to sway.
His branches'fingers
Interlaced with my hair as we seemed
to sway for hours.


Then i had to leave it.
I waved goodbye as it looked
sadly at my eyes
and held my gaze.
I could hear
its leaves falling to the ground like pins,
making a short,
discrete sound as they hit the ground below...

There you have it guys, hope you like it!


xoxoxo
loulou